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Kisses by ~unorthodoxfaith:iconunorthodoxfaith:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Other Romance > Open


I'm addicted to you,
like a Hershey's candybar.
Let me give you a kiss;
Your lips are so delicious.
Your tongue is like chocolate,
Sweet to my senses.
I melt in your arms,
Like you melt in my mouth.
©2004-2008 ~unorthodoxfaith
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Submitted: February 9, 2004
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An early Valentine's Day thing haha hope you all enjoy!

P.S- The Kiss referred to in line 3 is meant to be a Hershey Chocolate Kiss ^_^ But can be taken either way

The photo ontop is from:

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~unorthodoxfaith:iconunorthodoxfaith: Feb 9, 2004, 9:39:26 PM
Ugh, DA was being stupid and decided to NOT let me submitt the picture I was going to put on top of it- despite the fact that it WAS in .Jpg format.

Anyway...Oh yeah just to let you know, this poem is meant to be a little cutesy before you go all Psyco on my ass

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~PerfectImperfection:iconPerfectImperfection: Feb 9, 2004, 10:03:37 PM
AWWW I like it...especially the connection of the 2 kinds of kisses and how used either way the poem works

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What would I pay

To stay here beside you?

What would I do to see you

Smiling at me?
~unorthodoxfaith:iconunorthodoxfaith: Feb 9, 2004, 10:27:03 PM
Aw thanks ^__^ I dunno....Just felt like chocolate hehehe

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~unorthodoxfaith:iconunorthodoxfaith: Feb 10, 2004, 11:35:11 AM
^^ Thanks :D

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~firemage:iconfiremage: Feb 10, 2004, 4:41:28 PM
Aww, I like that, it sounds like something someone would attach to a hershey kiss! Hmm...chocolate *drool*

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~deadwite:icondeadwite: Feb 10, 2004, 10:24:49 PM
the melting in the mouth part is kinda kinky..=X jkjk nice way to convey candy..=D =P ;)

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~canisdirus:iconcanisdirus: Feb 10, 2004, 11:44:13 PM
It could just be a mood I'm in, but my imagination is running away with that last line. So many possibilities....

*slaps self, pulls mind from gutter*

I mean, great poem! I love your, uh, technique. And stuff.

*mind wanders*

Oh forget it. It's a good poem, nice and simple and sweet in more ways than one, and I really enjoyed reading it. So I'll leave it at that. :D
~unorthodoxfaith:iconunorthodoxfaith: Feb 11, 2004, 9:12:48 PM
...Er.. *reads over last line*

O.O

That wasn't supposed to be suggestive in ANYWAY...but I guess since you pointed it out...

lol :dies: oh man that is pretty funny!!

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~unorthodoxfaith:iconunorthodoxfaith: Feb 11, 2004, 9:16:08 PM
Woo hoo I'm kinky!! :dance:

I rock my own sox, lol

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